Sorry <3


Sex, Drugs, 'n' Roll 4Itachi looked down, then looked up, blushing a deep red, frowning at his friend. What the HELL was so amusing to Shisui? Itachi really wanted to know, and after a while of death staring the other quietened down. That's when he almost physically winced at the words. He frowned and very quickly, stood, darting to Shisui, pinning the other to the wall with his fore arm, keeping dangerously close as he grasped the phone, pressing the hang up button and tearing it away from the others grip. "Shut up... I know it is... You have no idea how many times I've tried to kill myself for thinking that way, but you have to keep quiet, and I am dead serious,Sex, Drugs, 'n' Roll 4


Sex, Drugs, Rock 'n' Roll 3Itachi blinked and looked up at Kisame wearily and nodded, pulling out his car keys and sighing. "Well, I'll go track him down, the troublesome part is to actually wake him up..." he said as he shook his head, some loose strands of raven black hair flying. He straightened before cracking his neck slightly, feeling completely stiff and sore before looking at Kisame unemotionally and nodding. "I'll be back later, I'll see you in about an hour or two, depends how long I take," he said softly as he then turned, starting to walk away. Shisui's house was fairly close, thank goodness, but so was theirs, only a few K's away, so Itachi only had to driSex, Drugs, Rock 'n' Roll 3
If not it's okay.
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MOVED TO ~bulba-girl-lover
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MOVED TO ~bulba-girl-lover
Speaking for
Speaking for myself: Glad you liked my signature nickname of "Dragon-lord" enough to use it in your own work!
WOULD HAVE BEEN NICE TO HAVE GOTTEN PROPS FOR THEM, BUT OH WELL.
Now... Would you be open to the idea of you and I having a private chat so that I may discuss with you the many things that need fixing in your writing? You have the potential to be a great writer; there's bad habits that need working on.
For instance: Your spelling/grammar; your plot; the heavy-handedness of Lust Objectifying the characters YOU like, and the blatant "DRAW ME THINGS!" in the Artist's Comments.
I am willing to help you if you're open to the idea.
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"Most people are about as happy as they make up their minds to be." ~ Abraham Lincoln
My Dragon Scroll! [link] Please to be clicking on the hatchlings and eggs! Thank you. ^_^
I am actually so astounded, amazed, and happy about your intelligence that I think I'm going to cry.
Now, then, here's something to remember:
"Alot" is actually supposed to be "a lot." It is two words. "Allot" means to distribute.
For further visual reference, you may take a look at this LiveJournal icon that I use. [link]
It makes use of visual tricks to help you realize the error and the correction of misspelled or misused words.
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"Most people are about as happy as they make up their minds to be." ~ Abraham Lincoln
My Dragon Scroll! [link] Please to be clicking on the hatchlings and eggs! Thank you. ^_^
My stupid what?
The number of people who don't know the difference between "your" and "you're" is insane.
I'm loving that LJ icon
It's one of my top five peeves. XD
If you have an LJ, feel free to use! My LJ is silvarbelle. ^_~
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"Most people are about as happy as they make up their minds to be." ~ Abraham Lincoln
My Dragon Scroll! [link] Please to be clicking on the hatchlings and eggs! Thank you. ^_^
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